moon jumper

Thank you both so much for your reviews! I'm now finished with haikus and the next challenge is rondeaus...don't know how that's going to work out. I guess we'll see ...

I have finally made the few changes everyone has suggested! Thank you all for your time and reviews!

Two more reviews! You guys are awesome! I will take in all ideas and fix my haikus when school decides not to hate me X/. Thanks! MJ

I'd like to thank everyone for reviewing my haikus. I will keep your comments in mind when I get back to the others I have written...school has gotten in the ...

Wow. I didn't know I had all of these reviews! I am seriously getting behind! Everyone: Thank you for your time and reviews! After receiving three or four reviews I've ...

I love this. I'll come back and critique when my eyelids aren't constantly falling much to my opposition. ~jumper

Okay, so maybe it has some lines from Sorcerer's Stone, but don't worry, the plot is completely different. There are a few lines in some scenes from there, but that's ...

OMG! That was my birthday! Ridiculous! Why didn't I read this before! I love it SO MUCH! (I'm talking in ALL CAPS not screaming!) Favorite Part: PENGUIN ATTACK OH NOES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ...

I agree. It is clever, but you need a rhyme scheme. Maybe you should go back and edit it a little. If you need any help just PM me. ~jumper

whoa. you have a great story coming along here. KailaMarie got all of the grammar, so there isn't much to say here except: great story, like your writing, and keep ...

I thought it was brilliant. But I'm not the greatest author in the universe though. I like the 'Lord oh Lord' phrase, it kept the poem moving along. ***